its been so long since i last saw my Cofagrigus Coffin i just stopped using him but i really miss him i might start training him again but i dunno. i captured Coffin as a Cofagrigus so he wasn't as strong as he could'a been but whatever i loved him none the less we became friends fast but time passed on and he became less and less useful i feel bad now cause i loved him so much but ya know people change and we loss faith in our pokemon and replace them but me i continue to train them all after a while *sigh* i wish.. i would have started training him before MissingNo Died. if your wondering what i mean then keep reading.
Me- hey buddy i wanna ask u about something
Friend- Hey what is it?
Me- u have played the first pokemon red so have u captured a MissingNo?
Friend- a MissingNo? whats that?
Me- are u stupid? MissingNo is the coolest glitch in the history of glitch's and u don't know what a MissingNo is?
Friend- Well i guess not i don't know what a MissingNo is freak
Me- ur no help what so ever
Friend- if it was only in the first games then its dead to everyone in the world just forget about it
Me- no way MissingNo is awesome i give if ur gonna be a jerk about it then i will ask someone else
"i'm gonna play pokemon white"
when i went on it i got the shock of my life Zekrom's huge sprite model was all glitchy and pixlated and i was scared outta my wits but i chose continue game anyway when i got i was in a blood covered room and in the center i saw my favorite glitch MissingNo but poor things it was bleeding out and looked as it he would die at any moment i walked over a clicked a
and he spoke back
"ye...yeah...i guess not the glitch i used...to be"
"what happened to you MissingNo you look so..."
"urk...yeah i know....im a ghost of the glitch i used to be no one knows about me anymore
im nothing to anyone anymore i don't know many people who even know about me or what i am i miss the days when people would catch me to see if i would really screw up there games know i'm pretty much dead this room...i wanted to speak to you your one of the only people who still remember me i wanted to speak to you before i died for good"
"for good!?! no MissingNo you cant die?!?!"
"no choice this is what has become of me just promise me you wont forget about me when i'm gone"
"i would never forget you MissingNo"
"hehe thanks..urk...i guess it gotta leave now bye kid remember you promised"
and with that MissingNo was gone and i was in Lostlorn forest
i started crying my favorite glitch just died in front of my very eyes and i could do nothing about it when i was done crying i decided it was time to train Coffin i was still sad but i felt that crying about it wouldn't change it and it was time to get something done.
i screamed when i saw him his body was dark and light gray with blood all over his body
"thats right its time to reclaim my space in your team..."
heres part on of my new creepypasta hope you like it
It's okay, but I think you could use some work on capitalization, grammar and punctuation~ Good job though~!
thank yeah i know i never really care about grammar i just ignore it most of the time (mostly cause i cant spell half the time XD0 as long as people can understand it
Maybe you could work on it.. It would make the piece better overall.
yeah i know i get that a lot -_-
Sorry, just some advice.